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Dragon Age: Origins

Tue Nov 3, 2009, 12:04 AM
"Thousands of years ago, elves ruled the surface of Thedas, but today they live in mankind's shadow, whether as an oppressed underclass confined to urban slums or, in the case of the Dalish tribes, forced to wander the ancient forests forever."

"Elven Warriors and rogues may alternatively choose a proud but trying life among the Mahariel clan of the Dalish elves, preferring to wander the ancient forests in perceptual isolation over letting humankind corrupt the last true elven culture. But a chance encounter with a relic of your people's past threatens to change those plans."

Why does this sound so familiar.
Fleydara. Altterdor. Elvish Exiles for the New Human Imperial Empire.
Great. Someone has come up with the same ideas I did.

I'm going to curl up in a ball and kiss the Dancer from the East Legacy goodbye.

Why did someone have to come up with similar ideas. BEFORE I finished the first book?

I feel so unoriginal now.

  • Mood: Depressed

The Loss, The Lost

Sun Nov 1, 2009, 9:54 AM
I'm thinking if this should be the 2nd story that I'm submitting to the competition. Hopefully the edited version would be competition worthy.

Ugh I feel so emotional right now after writing that.



Also, to whom this might concern:
If you're still stalking my DeviantART account
this story was based on our time together
and the memories that have haunted me since

Hope you've moved on already.

  • Mood: Remorse
  • Listening to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZ5XjRBTEpU

Inspired

Wed Oct 28, 2009, 7:53 PM
Firstly I'm not sure why I needed to put this on my journal but by the looks of things I don't think it'd matter much if I did or didn't... Maybe I'm just indeed of a good 2nd story for the competition and I need to express myself before deviant emotions get poured into other good (unrelated) story ideas... Which could turn out badly. -Yaoi smut fanfics might be a lethal result-

Also if anyone has any story ideas to throw to help me out for this competition voice your ideas in the comments section below~~

Anyway due to various reason I'm beginning to feel more and more like a Soldier, leaving home. No and I don't mean like Gevien in Dancer from the East (AKA Mercy Giver) I mean that I feel like a Soldier a volunteer, leaving home and my love, both which I Know I'll never return to.

I feel like I'm going to fight a war I know I'll never return from. But I am not sad about this "Tragedy" I feel noble. Disillusioned some might say, but I feel noble because I know what I'm defending.

I may be far away on a forgien battlefield but I know I am fighting in defense of my home, in defence of my love. I believe that for every man I kill out here in my muck covered, lice ridden foxhole, I am protecting the very idea of what I want to keep in existance.

Yes, my home might be sold or demolished, Yes my love may find another man. But I am not sad because I know that the soil I love remains free. I am not sad because I know my love will be happy and not berieved by grief should I fall.

She might not know it, but as she holds her new lover. I am here protecting her, fighting for her right to be a woman of honor, fighting for the land she lives on, fighting for the very idea that is home.

I shall not rest until I can be sure these dear things to me are safe. I shall fight and keep fighting until they are safe or until I am dead and can fight no more.

That is why I am leaving home and my love behind to fight some stupid old man's war. That is why I am willing to throw my life away to some wild man's dream.

I love, my Love
and my Love is threatened.

And if taking up arms is the least I can do to ensure her survival and freedom to be her.
I will do so gladly.

  • Mood: Emotional
  • Listening to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2QeUzaH9yo
  • Reading: Gaunt's Ghosts - The Founding
  • Drinking: Maybe...

The day of the Toilet.

Wed Oct 28, 2009, 1:02 AM
We just got our promotional results today... I swear half the class disappeared to cry in the toilets... and the other half followed them in to comfort them. Seriously though, it was a sad day, many tears disappointment and half-hearted no-conditional advancement. Hope those who have shed tears in the toilets of my school are feeling better.

Either than that projects have ground to an abrupt halt. Old bridging courses are rearing their ugly heads, World of Warcraft is calling me back to zombie-hood, involuntary writing competitions that my school signed me up for are closing in..... Well least I got promoted ^-^

Hopefully after this week, a tonne of deviations would be put up... God knows what about and He also knows who'll read em

Chiao~~ <3

(That was so gay... I think I'm turning... NOT)

  • Mood: Tender
  • Listening to: Complied DftE 'soundtrack'
  • Reading: Gaunt's Ghosts - The Founding
  • Watching: I need to start watching tv again
  • Playing: World of Warcraaaaaaaggghhh need to stop playing!
  • Eating: Random tid bits lying round the house
  • Drinking: Water

Mercy Giver a Character Driven Fantasy Novel

Wed Oct 14, 2009, 9:38 PM
Mercy Giver is a character driven fantasy novel, the first of the series, From the East. Playing on action and consequence rather than good or evil, characters find their way through a world of cohesion and discrimination; forced into war by society for society, they try their best to find their place in the world amongst it’s battlefields.

The events of the From the East series take place on Runéa a continent in the Southern Hemisphere of its planet, where ancient Elven Kingdoms have strived for an eternity practicing the magics, the sciences and the arts. However their downfall began when humans were introduced to them as house slaves who cooked cleaned and performed other menial tasks that the Elves had no interest doing, allowing them to further their abilities in any craft they practiced. This was when some in the first few generations of slaves managed to flee from their masters who did not care particularly, since slaves were plentiful and cheap.

Generations later there are countless numbers of Human Kingdoms set up in the uninhabited regions of Runéa, from the Western Deserts to the frozen wastes of the South, their inhabitants strictly against human slavery (while the house slaves known as O’lva wouldn’t care nonetheless). So as two of the Major factions of elves; the Que’denian Empire and the Kressen Kingdoms, enter a major war with each other, lasting thousands of years, humans began making plans to smash the weakened victor…

After a long war of attrition, Que’denians emerged the victors and most of the Kressen Kingdoms fell under the Que’denian Empire, sharing knowledge and cultures while the few more prominent Kressen kingdoms became independent states. This was when an inter-racial war started, humans banding together for a common cause of freeing their O’lvaian brethren launching attacks on Que’denian cities. However, Elven Magic and Combat Expertise honed over millennia crushed them, and continued to do so for dozens of, what the elves would call, ‘rebellions’ or ‘skirmishes’, which would last an average of a year. The elves did not crush them due to their tradition of not taking cities, keeping wars away from scholars and non-combatants. Thus humans would replenish their numbers in a few decades and try again, which ultimately led to the Last War of Elfdom, an 84 year long war against a human leader who understood Elven Tactics and used his knowledge against them. Setting up the New Human Imperial Empire when he took the capitol, he ordered all non-combatant elves into exile so that they may re-pay him for his mercy, then proceeded to systematically exterminate all others of the Que’denian Empire.

Mercy Giver takes place 45 years after that 84 year long war. Elves are now in exiled in the ghost infested jungles of Fleydara, despised and hated by their new human rulers. In this oppressive atmosphere, Gevein, a young elf trained in the ways of an ancient deadly Elven martial art, finds himself drafted into military service as ‘repayment to the Emperor’. Leaving his lover and his home behind, he is drafted with his best friend and ends up with three other draftees, all whom are sent off westward to fight a war beside humans who’d rather see them dead, against an exotic enemy who are just as despised as they are, for a cause that none of them believe in.

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Yay? or Nay?

  • Mood: Questionable
  • Listening to: DC Ruins Battle Ambience in Fallout 3
  • Reading: Gaunt's Ghosts - The Founding
  • Playing: Fallout 3 - With mods on Meth
  • Eating: Fried Rice
  • Drinking: ICED Water

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